From:   jaimexo@gmail.com
Sent time:   Monday, October 24, 2011 7:13:58 AM
To:   globalrevolutionmedia@googlegroups.com
Cc:   globalrevolutionmedia@googlegroups.com
Subject:   Re: [GlobalRevolutionMedia] Re: Oct 15 video FINAL REVIEW/NOTES
 

Good work, guys!

 

I like the story arc; it transitions nicely.

 

Sent from my iPhone

 

On Oct 24, 2011, at 9:02 AM, Michael Premo <m.premo@gmail.com> wrote:

 

> good work.

>

> for The Bronx, maybe some creative name like Bronx March on Fordham

> Rd. first bronx GA . . . something fun.

>

> if there's anything useable from the sparkler footage, would love to

> see some of that if at all possible.

>

> echo, that i'm not feeling starting with the aussie/ziwi family.

>

> one flag i have is about diversity and representation. As we move

> forward we need to try hard to make sure we get interviews with a

> diversity of folks, gender, race, etc. there are lots of shots of

> different kinds of people, but for the most part the interviews are

> dominated by white folks. it's problematic to just have them

> "speaking." i understand we may not have footage, but we have to be

> mindful as we shot more actions, to get interviews with all kinds of

> folks.

>

> with love and light

>

>

>

> Michael Premo

>

> c. 917.547.1292

> http://www.michaelpremo.com

>

> http://housingisahumanright.org

>

>

>

>

>

> On Mon, Oct 24, 2011 at 8:34 AM, Abraham Heisler <abe@abrahamheisler.com> wrote:

>> I still like Impact font better. :P

>>

>> On Oct 24, 2011 2:15 AM, "Feliz Solomon" <felizsolomon@hotmail.com> wrote:

>>>

>>> about the titles- i just meant that the font and position change. like

>>> i said, nit-picky. but they could also be more specific; one says

>>> "mountaintop removal protest/midtown manhattan" and the next just says

>>> "the bronx"

>>> is there something unique to that bronx walk that could be mentioned?

>>> are there links to anything awesome related to these locations? (the

>>> mountaintop one, for sure. wash sq could link to something that could

>>> give people some info. could put, "visit: www..." I just think the

>>> more info the better)

>>> not all locations have lower thirds, so if those are special i want to

>>> see why! especially since not all boroughs are there... yet

>>

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