From:   Peter Azen <>
Sent time:   Monday, October 24, 2011 7:20:33 AM
Subject:   Re: [GlobalRevolutionMedia] Re: Oct 15 video FINAL REVIEW/NOTES

Hey guys.

I loved it, and agree with some of the above comments. At 2:50 it seems like there's a mistake on the video because of the audio. I think it is something that cab be easily and quickly resolved.

Also I think you should only use one typeface, and if you use two choose two sans-serif for example. I like Abe's idea of using Impact maybe.

I think that the credits in the beginning and in the end are too different, and the serifed typeface at the beginning makes readability hard.

Apart from this little audio correction and typeface correction, I think that the video is incredible!!! I'm very happy to have contributed to such an amazing video made with incredible people. And let's not stop this anytime soon.



On Mon, Oct 24, 2011 at 9:13 AM, <> wrote:
Good work, guys!

I like the story arc; it transitions nicely.

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On Oct 24, 2011, at 9:02 AM, Michael Premo <> wrote:

> good work.
> for The Bronx, maybe some creative name like Bronx March on Fordham
> Rd.  first bronx GA . . . something fun.
> if there's anything useable from the sparkler footage, would love to
> see some of that if at all possible.
> echo, that i'm not feeling starting with the aussie/ziwi family.
> one flag i have is about diversity and representation. As we move
> forward we need to try hard to make sure we get interviews with a
> diversity of folks, gender, race, etc. there are lots of shots of
> different kinds of people, but for the most part the interviews are
> dominated by white folks. it's problematic to just have them
> "speaking."  i understand we may not have footage, but we have to be
> mindful as we shot more actions, to get interviews with all kinds of
> folks.
> with love and light
> Michael Premo
> c. 917.547.1292
> On Mon, Oct 24, 2011 at 8:34 AM, Abraham Heisler <> wrote:
>> I still like Impact font better. :P
>> On Oct 24, 2011 2:15 AM, "Feliz Solomon" <> wrote:
>>> about the titles- i just meant that the font and position change. like
>>> i said, nit-picky. but they could also be more specific; one says
>>> "mountaintop removal protest/midtown manhattan" and the next just says
>>> "the bronx"
>>> is there something unique to that bronx walk that could be mentioned?
>>> are there links to anything awesome related to these locations? (the
>>> mountaintop one, for sure. wash sq could link to something that could
>>> give people some info. could put, "visit: www..." I just think the
>>> more info the better)
>>> not all locations have lower thirds, so if those are special i want to
>>> see why! especially since not all boroughs are there... yet